Dominance and submission – Saturday Spanks – #ASMSG #MAR


A Novel In Progress


Release date should be around the 28th of this month.

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Returning her clothes to the chair, and wishing she’d thought to dress while he was gone, she scurried to the vanity across the room.  She could feel him following her, and as she placed her elbows on the cold, hard, marble surface, she glanced in the mirror and watched his approach.

“Place your palms down flat and don’t move them,” said tersely.

To her horror he pulled the bottom of her swimsuit up into her crack and wiped his hand over her exposed bottom. She felt the hot flush of embarrassment wash across her face, but when his hand began slapping his palm on her naked skin with hard, rhythmic smacks, her modesty became the last thing on her mind.

“You need this like you need to breathe,” he proclaimed, “and I hope you learn from it.”

“Okay,” she squirmed. “I get it.”

“Not yet you don’t, I still hear that edge to your voice,” he said sternly, accelerating the swats.

“No, please,” she begged, staring up at him in the mirror, “enough.  I’m sorry.”

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Thanks for stopping by, and I hope you liked the little taste.  Before you dash off, I do hope you’ll have time to hop on over to the others on the Saturday Spanks Blog.  So many terrific writers to enjoy.

17 responses

  1. What is it about cowboys who spank? Yum.

    1. I know, right? What Is It????

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  3. The mirror is a nice touch – having to watch your own spanking.

    1. Thank you, PK. Appreciate you leaving this – it was such a clear image in my head when I wrote it.

  4. Oh, I love the mirror effect too… There is something in the conceived visual at certain times of eros and yearn… Perhaps she will “See” the edge in her voice dissipate as she continues to watch… Loved this Maggie… 🌟

    1. Thank you, Joseph. And for Him to see her face, and her eyes reflecting back at him. Such a connection. :)

  5. Jolynn Raymond | Reply

    “but when his hand began slapping his palm on her naked skin with hard, rhythmic smacks, her modesty became the last thing on her mind.” Yes, a proper spanking will do that. Loved it. More please.

    1. :) – More Please? Aren’t you kind. I might post another excerpt next Saturday, and if I do it will be because of your very gracious request. Thank you.

  6. Ooh, I liked that she “watched his approach”. Everything was yummy about this. Nice cowboy pic, too :)

    1. Thank you. Yes, I liked Mr Cowboy as well. I thought he’d do in a pinch. :)

  7. He’s very observant. He could still hear the edge in her voice. Hmm, she’s in for more spankings, I wager. Nice!

    1. Indeed he is, and yes he could. Those Aussie cowboys !!

  8. “like you need to breathe” – Love that!

    1. That is so kind of you, Thank you.

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